Assignment 3... U C what I C (Graphic Storytelling)

So the assignment required us to take a maximum of 10 pictures without text and make it into a story, with a twist at the end.
Inspiration for this was when i saw a bottle of expired milk in my fridge.
So the story goes.
Guy feels hungry -> Open Fridge -> Sees Bottle of milk -> Take Milk ->
Pour Milk -> Drink Milk -> Sees that it's expired -> Visit Toilet

Comments were that the pictures were too dark. So i'll be trying to get a better camera to re-take all these photos, and make the last photo clearer ( in meaning).